Merry Christmas and…

December 23, 2011

… for those of you who aren’t Christmas-y for whatever reason, happy holidays, winter solstice and everything else.

We’ve just gotten our first big snow of the season here in Colorado. Nothing like what they got south of us, but still 9 inches is enough to break out the snow shovel. It also makes me appreciate my Kindle even more than usual. Pre-Kindle being snowed in meant finding something to reread. I’ve never been one of those people who have a big TBR pile. I always bought a book or two, read them, and then looked for more. Being snowed in with the Kindle would only be a problem if the electricity was out the whole time and the K was due for a charge when it happened.

I don’t know if any of you who read here are mystery fans as well as romance, but I confess to having been recently royally hooked by a mystery series – and I still haven’t figured out why. I read in some forum or another that Candice Proctor, author of Whispers of Heaven, one of my favorite romances, writes a mystery series under the name of C.S. Harris. So of course I looked it up to see. A couple of the reviews I saw panned the accuracy of details of the historical setting of the series – England in 1811-12 – but since I’m no expert on that place and time, I figured what the heck.

However, I do know a lot of about dogs and horses, and there are noticeable and frequent enough errors about both to make me stop reading most books. Did that stop me? No. I can make a whole list of other things that would stop me cold in most books:

I didn’t count, but I bet 80% of the characters have gray eyes, enough that I started to roll my eyes every time another one showed up. What percentage of the population, even in 1811 England, do you think had gray eyes?

The hero single-handedly and without consequences kills bad guys right and left until that gets eyes-rolling too (he also gets injured so severely so often a mass of scar tissue an inch deep must cover his arms and torso). He gets married in the last book available in the series at the moment, and his wife and he are obviously going to have a body-count competition in the future.

Since the books aren’t romances it’s not a case of a TSTL heroine, but equal opportunity TSTL characters, not constantly, but they all get their turn. Good guys: “Oh, it must be a trap.” “Yes, it’s a trap.” “Let’s go stick our noses in there just in case we’re wrong.” Bad or so-so guys: “Lie, lie, lie.” I know anyone with any sense could check and find out it’s a lie, but what the heck.

None of it mattered. I read all 6 of them and will pounce on the 7th when it’s available next year. I think I’m hooked for the same reasons people get hooked on soap operas. Secrets, lies, constant emotional turmoil, even a dash of incest. Whatever. I went through them like a bowl of popcorn. They aren’t exactly bargain books either at $7.99 for the Kindle version of most of them and I think $11.99 for the newest ones. Fortunately my library had most of them, so I didn’t do mortal damage to the book budget.

If anyone else has read or ever reads any of these, I’d love to know if you too got hooked or if you’re made of sterner stuff.

~Ellen

 


Amazon’s KDP Select Program and…

December 17, 2011

I don’t know how Amazon is going about letting customers know about its new KDP Select program, but the author forums are abuzz with discussions about it. As Amazon customers know (even those of us who aren’t members), they have a Prime program that gives members free 2-day shipping and other benefits in return for a set membership fee each year. The Prime membership is also now going to include the ability to borrow one Kindle book a month free. As of now, that’s what the advantage of the program is to the reader.

An author who signs up with the program allows her book(s) in the program to be borrowed and also can offer the book for free 5 days in every 90-day period. Additionally, for a new book entered in the program, the author would be able to have pre-release orders (something indies have not been able to do in the past). In return for this, the author has to give Amazon the exclusive right to sell the book on its website – no B&N, Sony, Kobo, Apple, selling on the author’s website, etc. In fact so far the interpretation is that the author cannot give digital copies of the book to anyone, even for review. Surely that will be clarified more sensibly soon.

Needless to say, some authors think this is awful; others think it’s great and are hopping on the Select bandwagon with glee. I’m sitting on the sidelines thinking about it. For starters, since my ebooks are distributed to B&N, Sony, et al., via Smashwords, it would take weeks for me to get them taken down from those sites so that I could enter a program that requires exclusivity with Amazon. Theoretically I’m an ideal author for the program. I’ve never calculated, but definitely more than 95% of all my ebook sales are from Amazon, probably more than 98% if I did the math. However, do I want to tell the Nook, Sony, and Kobo people too bad? I put out paperbacks of my books in order not to say no to what is also a very tiny percentage of my readers. One author is working on a way to tell her readers if they buy from Amazon, she’ll convert the book to the format they want and send it to them, but IME not every ebook reader knows how to or wants to learn how to sideload a book onto their device, and of course the get your ebook instantaneously convenience would be turned into a back and forth aggravation.

For some authors the lure is being able to offer their books for free for those 5 days. Amazon has not allowed indies to offer their books for free in the past. However, clever people soon figured that if they offered their books for free in other places that do allow it, Amazon would price match and also offer the book for free. Timing was a bear that way, but a lot of authors do it. Those of you who have been reading here for a while are probably aware I’ve never waved the free flag wildly. Every time I think about it, I hear my mother’s voice saying, “You get what you pay for.” I know that’s not always true. I’ve scooped up some decent free books myself when given the chance, but even so….

The free theory is that readers who would never buy an unknown author try a free book, like it, and then buy all the author’s other books. It does work that way for some, but it works best with series books when the first one is free and of course my romances are standalones. So, for right now, I’m not putting any of my books in the Select program, but I’d love to hear thoughts on it from any of you. Maybe I will try it with a new book if early participants think it does give useful exposure. The minimum participation time is 90 days, so if a new book could be in the program for only 90 days and get the advantage of pre-orders…. Well, maybe.

Tidbits: Dancing on Coals has now been given 5-star reviews by KristieJ and by the Maldivian Book Reviewer. (Okay, KristieJ’s is really a 4.99 review, but what the heck.) Really great reviews that had me smiling for hours, and I thank them both for picking the book up so quickly to review. In addition, MBR is making Dancing on Coals one of her December pick of the month books and I did an interview with her that will be posted in early January. It might appear as early as January 1, but I’ll let everyone know the date as soon as I find out. Her questions were excellent, and I think you may enjoy reading the interview.

And speaking of free — MBR will have some gift copies of Dancing on Coals at the time the interview appears. Mom is mercifully silent on that subject.

~Ellen

 


RomCon Winner

November 30, 2011

RomCon notified me today of the winner of the copy of Dancing on Coals from the people who commented on my guest blog there. Her name is Claudia, and I don’t think she’s a follower of this blog just from the wording of the comment. To anyone who does read here and had fingers crossed (Mervi?), sorry. She’s not in the U.S. so I’m lucky she’s choosing an ebook as I never considered international people, and of course just from those who do follow here that I know are non-U.S., I should have.

~Ellen


At Last!

November 25, 2011

The paperback of Dancing on Coals is now available for order on Amazon. It’s linked to the Kindle version already (which is how I found it so fast without someone more on the ball telling me about it), but some things, like the story description, aren’t there yet. It saves me a phone call because I really felt it should be up by now and was ready to start harassing Create Space on Monday. I hope those of you who have been waiting think it was worth it once you’ve read it.

~Ellen


Happy Thanksgiving and Eek!

November 23, 2011

I suspect I got the dates wrong on all the sites where Dancing on Coals was going to be featured in that last post. All three of them have already been posted. The guest blog at RomCon went up on the 21st, a fact I only just woke up to. That’s the one where one person who comments will win a copy of the book.

http://romconinc.com/index.php?option=com_lyftenbloggie&view=entry&category=historical&id=1707%3Adancing-on-coals-by-ellen-oconnell&Itemid=23#comment

Moral of that story:  Never trust me if so much as a single number is involved.

Happy Thanksgiving to all of you who frequent this blog and for those of you in countries where tomorrow is just another Thursday – extra happy Thursday anyway. All of you who come here are one of the many things I’m grateful for and have to celebrate because you are part of the audience my books have found. Just two years ago I never dreamed of such a thing, and my life has changed for the better because of it. Thank you, each and every one of you.

~Ellen


Paperback Update and Guest Blog Post

November 20, 2011

You may remember that in a comment to the previous post I said I’d done a process that would speed up the appearance of the paperback version of Dancing on Coals on Amazon. Well, no, I didn’t. Whether I clicked the wrong thing or didn’t click something, I screwed up and slowed the process instead of speeding it, especially since I didn’t wake up to the fact things weren’t progressing until I got an email from Create Space saying yoo hoo what do you want to do with this thing?

So I got in gear and think I straightened everything out and the paperback should appear on Amazon sometime in the next few days. I know some of you are waiting, and I’m sorry for the screw up.

Also for you paperback people (since I figure the ebookers have already got their copy if they wanted it), I’ve done a guest blog for Romcon.com which is scheduled to appear Tuesday, November 22. Romcon asks that those who do guest blogs offer a gift copy of their book to be given as a prize to someone who comments on the guest blog. They choose the winner and notify me who it is and pass on the needed info so I can send the book. In my case the winner can choose either the ebook or paperback version of any of my books (signed paperback).

http://romconinc.com/index.php?option=com_lyftenbloggie&view=lyftenbloggie&category=historical&Itemid=23

If you want to leave a comment on that blog and don’t want to win a copy of a book you’ve already read, go ahead and comment. If you win, let me know, and you can have an Amazon gift certificate instead of the book.

Another blog put up info about Dancing yesterday, but it isn’t a review, just a copy of the description that appears on Amazon with the cover image.

http://www.indiepublishers.blogspot.com

And another has scheduled posting an excerpt on Friday, November 25th:

http://the-ruthin-trilogy.blogspot.com

Thanks to everyone for all the good feedback and for the reviews. I keep waiting for the first person to pop up with “I hate xxx,” but as of right now enough readers who do like the book have spoken that the people who don’t aren’t going to bruise me too badly when they speak. :-)

~Ellen


Indie Editing

November 2, 2011

In a comment to the last post, DallasE mentioned editing in Kindle books (thanks for the compliment, DE). I don’t know how many of you follow any threads on the Amazon forums or how many are interested in the subject of editing, but as it happens there have been some really nasty discussions of indie books and editing over there recently. For an indie author to pop up on those threads would be volunteering for a cyber-lynching, and I’ve already had a couple of those :-) , so I’m not volunteering for more. But I do find the subject interesting and maybe some readers do too.

First of all I think every one of my books has at least one review that says something along the lines of “it would be better with an editor.” They also have some that agree with DE that the books have as good as or better editing than books by traditional publishers. Since none of these people specify, my guess is that what the negative reviewers are talking about (and most of them aren’t that negative, they make passing comments on decent reviews of the books) is what’s called content or structural editing. In other words if someone doesn’t like the family conflict in Eyes, they’re sure a content editor would have made me remove or revise it. If they didn’t like the long separation in Sing, they’re sure an editor would have made me “fix” it. Content editors work on the structure of a story.

Then there are copy or line editors, and they’re the ones who fix the affect/effect, reign/rein (as a horse person my pet peeve), bare/bear problems along with other grammar, punctuation, and style problems.

Finally there are proofreaders who are supposed to and never do catch every single typo.

I confess I’m one of the sinners that the anti-indies in those threads are ranting and raving about who ought to be STOPPED. Amazon should refuse to accept any books that aren’t “professionally” edited. I rely on beta readers for what would be content editing. My theory is several people familiar with the genre are better than one editor with one set of ideas and biases. The drawback to this is that not everybody agrees on everything, and I get to decide who to listen to about what, which brings my ideas and biases back in, but then I figure I’m entitled to that.

Copy editing and proofreading I do myself, and in spite of the fact that most people claim you can’t proof your own work, I don’t think many would claim my books have much of a problem in those areas.

I have a couple of times thought maybe it’s time to hire someone else to do this and every time I give up the idea because I see posts in the author forums I frequent like one plaintive one that has stuck with me by an author who said her book had been through three editors and she was still getting one-star reviews complaining about errors. For those who don’t know about her, Amanda Hocking, a wildly successful indie author of YA paranormal romances, took a traditional publishing deal and gave the fact that she’d paid several editors and still got complaints about poor editing as one of her reasons.

That’s the argument I’d like to shout out on those nasty threads. Anyone can set themselves up as an editor simply by putting out the word that’s what they’re doing and charging for it, whether they’re qualified or not. There are no certifications for “editors.” There are no licensing requirements. And if your knowledge of grammar, style, and punctuation isn’t good enough to do it yourself, how can you recognize whether or not the person you paid did it well? So requiring a “professional” editor is just requiring the author to pay someone for a service they may or may  not get.

I also admit I’ve tried samples of some indie books that are so bad there isn’t enough money in the world to pay me to edit them. Getting through a whole book with that many errors per page would take me the rest of my life even if I reach my goal of 105. So I don’t really have an answer to the editing problem for anyone else, but I’m pretty sure ranting and raving in the Amazon forums isn’t it. I also don’t understand their problem. They want books like that filtered out. A glance at the Look Inside feature lets you know instantly, and if they really want to filter us out, all they have to do is sort by price and not look at anything less than $9.99.

~Ellen

 


I’m Done!

October 30, 2011

Addition 10/31/11 – One thing I forgot to mention about Smashwords that Ava’s comment reminded me of – it’s a way for those in countries where the book is unavailable (or where there’s a “delivery fee” of as much as the price added on) to get books for your Kindle or other ereader. For Kindle you want the mobi format.

As of right now, the book is available for Kindle on Amazon and on Smashwords in other formats, including epub. A search didn’t bring it up on B&N yet.

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Well, almost. The DONE is that I uploaded Dancing on Coals to Amazon’s KDP for Kindle and to B&N’s PubIt for Nook earlier today. I also sent revised f iles to Create Space, which produces the paperback and distributes to Amazon. So my best guess is the book will be available to Kindle and Nook people in 2 or 3 days, and the paperback available to order in maybe 5-7 days.

Those of you who were here last year may remember how it went with Sing My Name. The product page on Amazon appears like the Cheshire Cat, little by little, so at first you see a skeletal version with no story summary and some of the usual features missing and gradually everything fills in. I’ve never gone directly with B&N before, so I’m not sure what to expect there, but I think it’s usually similar to Amazon. I read somewhere once that before you can find a new book by searching the title or author’s name on Amazon, you can find it by the identifying ASIN number Amazon uses, so if anyone wants to try that, the number is B0061FDRNA.

The “almost” is Smashwords. I’m working on that version now and will have it done before I go to bed tonight. I confess to a singular lack of enthusiasm. SW requires an upload in Word, which I hate, and then they convert, and the end product is never as pretty as the Amazon Kindle version I format myself and check out on my Kindle before uploading. This time I also checked the B&N epub file both in the reader on my PC and on my Kobo, which isn’t exactly a Nook, but the format is the same, and things looked good there. So my advice to the world is if you have a Kindle or Nook, get the book from Amazon or B&N. Settle for SW only if you have another reader. The book will be distributed by SW to Kobo (but I understand they’re so backed up they aren’t taking new books right now), Sony, Apple, and Diesel, but it takes weeks for those sites to get books from SW and get them up. So in spite of my prejudice, I will upload a plain vanilla file to SW. The one advantage there is the ability to set the sample size larger than Amazon’s 10%. I think I’m going to use 35% this time.

Happy Halloween!

~Ellen


Since you asked…

October 21, 2011

I’m sorry I’ve been missing in action the last few days (and won’t bore all of you with dog happenings). As you may remember, comments from people who have not commented before have to be approved, and there were a couple I didn’t get to very promptly, and of course I see the when! when! questions.

As it happens, yes, it may be Halloween. I uploaded to Create Space (which produces the paperback version) a couple of days ago. That version has been reviewed and approved there, and my proof copy is on the way to me. If the timing is the same as for the other books, I’ll get the proof in the middle of next week. I’ll do a final read-through on that myself. Even if I find things that need fixing (and I always have on the previous books), I’ll do those corrections and format for Kindle right away and upload ebook versions to Amazon and B&N within a day. Then it’s up to those sites how fast the book appears for sale.

It’s extremely encouraging to have readers waiting so eagerly for a book of mine. I sure hope when all is said and done you think it was worth the wait.

~Ellen


Excerpt from Dancing on Coals

October 2, 2011

I got Dancing on Coals up on my website tonight finally and posted both the Story Summary and an excerpt while I was at it. So I thought I’d put them both here too in case it’s easier for anyone, although IMO the formatting on the website is better. I know the Story Summary has been in another post, but I thought it would be easier to put it here again so no one has to go back and look if they want it, and of course anyone can skip it.

Story Summary

After escaping robbers intent on murder, Katherine Grant says, “I jumped from the frying pan into the fire. Before long I’ll be dancing on the coals.” The highwaymen were the frying pan; the handsome young Apache who saved her from them was the fire; and the coals? Gaetan.

Rage against the enemies of his people has consumed Gaetan from boyhood. The only use he ever found for any white was to test the sharpness of his knife. Forced by his brother to endure Katherine’s company, Gaetan tries to deny what he sees — the white woman has a man’s temper and a lion’s courage. She has an Apache heart.

In spite of hate, distrust and fear, surviving in the rugged country of southern Arizona and northern Mexico forges a strange bond between Katherine and Gaetan. When the bond turns to love, can they admit it? Can they bear the consequences?

Excerpt

She rolled down the hill. Faster and faster — Katherine landed at the bottom with a moan and sat up to see three bearded men running toward her. A rush of nervous excitement cleared away the last of her lethargy.

“Are you Americans?” she asked the barrel-chested man who arrived first.

“We sure are, darling. Who, or what, are you?”

“My name is Katherine Grant. I’ve been hoping to find someone like you for days. Maybe it’s too late, but I hope…. I need help.”

“Where did you come from? Where’s your people?”

“I’m — I’m alone. I was on a stage that was robbed, and then….”

Admitting to being alone was a mistake. The big man grabbed her hand and pulled her to her feet so hard her chest smacked into his. Her cry of pain had no effect on him. Wrapping a fist in her hair, he forced her head back and closed his mouth over hers in a bruising kiss. She kicked at his shin hard, only to hit the leather of his high boot. He laughed at her. “You want help from us, you’re going to have to be a lot more cooperative.”

Before Katherine could tell him what she thought of that — and of him — one of the other men said. “Come on, Cal. The lady needs help. Stop scaring her.”

“Lady.” The big man made a sound of contempt. “You ever seen a lady with pants stretched over her ass like that? If you don’t want any of what she’s peddling, I do.”

He squeezed one cheek of the body part he referred to as he talked. Katherine kicked at him again, aiming higher, but she was slow, and he avoided her easily. Gripping her left arm hard, he twisted it behind her back. For a moment she floated on the wave of pain. When her vision cleared, she saw more men joining the crowd around her.

“I mean it,” the second man said. “There’s no reason to hurt her. Let her go.”

“I ain’t gonna hurt her. She needs help. That means giving her food we paid for, letting her be extra weight on one of our horses. You going to be a Nancy boy and just give her what we scraped to pay for? I’m saying she has to pay her way is all. That’s fair.”

The men exchanged wary looks. Some of them sidled closer to Cal, some to the other man, but the way the men opposing Cal wouldn’t look directly at him told her Cal would get his way in the end. If she weren’t so tired, she could organize her thoughts, could tell them about ransom, could….

A ululating scream split the night. The sound scraped across Katherine’s nerves and down her spine as did another and another. The thunder of horses stampeding sounded with the last ungodly shriek.

“The horses! Damn it, you stupid sons of bitches, you left the horses!”

Cal let her go, yelling and cursing as he charged across the campsite. A few men followed him. Most of them looked too scared to move. “What the hell was that?”

“Apaches,” Katherine said, and she turned and ran.

She ran in the direction the horses had gone, even as the sound of them faded in the night. Stumbling over rocks and crashing into brush and cactus, she ran until she fell to her knees.

“Gaetan!”

Rifle fire sounded behind her. She should pray for a bullet to the heart. Instead she lurched to her feet and ran again, her blood pounding in her ears, a knife tearing at her side, her lungs burning. She fell and rolled.

“Gaetan!”

Staggering up, still she ran, but slower now. When she fell, she screamed a last time.

“Gaetan!”

Or maybe it wasn’t a scream. Maybe it was only a weak cry. She huddled on her knees in the dirt, sobbing as she gasped for breath.

The quality of the air around her changed. The ground gave off the faintest tremble. She held one heaving breath long enough to listen. The tremble swelled until the night vibrated with the drumbeat of galloping hooves. She made it to her feet, waved her arms hoping he’d see the light-colored shirt, and waited until a large shadow separated from the darkness, racing toward her.

“Gaetan. Gaetan!”

She stumbled a few steps forward. His outstretched arm hit her middle like a blow. She hung there against his leg and the side of the running horse until they were far from the camp, from the men and their guns. As Gaetan pulled the horse to a halt, Katherine didn’t wait for him to drop her. Whatever his intention, she wasn’t letting go. She kept a death grip on his arm and flailed until she got a foot on top of the stirrup and crawled onto the horse behind him. Wrapping her arms around his waist, she locked her hands together. He could pry her off or cut her off, but that was the only way he was going to get rid of her.

Afraid he might do just that, she didn’t relax until the horse started forward, slow now. The steady clop of hooves and the roll of the easy gait soothed her hammering heart and heaving lungs. Her arms and legs stopped quivering.

Close to full now, the moon showed grass, brush, and rocks in otherworldly relief, black, charcoal, and silver shadows passing in the night. Cool air whispered like silk across her fevered face. The sharp scent of horse sweat rose so thick in the air, she tasted salt on her tongue. Or maybe she tasted tears.

She sat erect, touching Gaetan only where her arms clutched his waist so desperately, but her hands rested against his stomach, bare skin against bare skin, and against all reason she took comfort from the size of him, from the muscular feel of him, warm and alive. He had used her to get the horses and never intended to come back for her. She knew it and decided her ghost should haunt him for it, but only for a little while. All that mattered was that he did come back.

Running like that had probably pumped the poison through her body faster, but it would make no difference in the end. She fought to keep her eyes open, fought the returning fog of fever, wanting to hold on to awareness, to the soft caress of the night, but she lost the battle. Her eyes closed; her head drooped. She sagged against Gaetan’s back, her cheek resting on his shoulder.

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